Appearance: Lucius is a young knight with a large muscular build. He carries himself with a sort of royal grace. P.S. He is a Werewolf XD

Non-core Material
Warder
Ordained Defender Archetype (Path of War Expanded)
Angelkin Aasimar with Truespeaker Alternate Racial Trait
Werewolf
Lycanthropic Adaptation Feat
Reactionary Trait
Fate's Favored Trait
Cold Iron Longsword

Rolret

Non-Core Materials:

• Plainsrunner
• Reactionary
• Agile Dancer (Path of War Expanded)

Appearance: A man of short stature, he has commonly been mistaken for a dwarf and then again for a short human. His thick grey beard and wild hair hide some of his more distinctive half-orcish attributes.

Personality: Viktor is a man of many faces. His strong personality has earned him many loyal friends and bitter enemies. Viktor will be both the first to buy drinks for the entire tavern while also being first to beat down the man who might have spilled ale on his nice fur coat.

Sourcebooks
Advanced Class Guide- Skald (class)
Advanced Player's Guide- Lingering Performance (Feat) Timely Inspiration (Spell)
Advanced Player's Guide/Advanced Race Guide- Sacred Tattoo (alternative racial trait)
Advanced Race Guide- Arena-Bred (Alternative Racial Trait); City-Raised (Alternative Racial Trait); Mystic (Alternative Racial Trait); Shaman's apprentice (Alternative Racial Trait), Skilled (Alternative Racial Trait)
Andoran, Spirit of Liberty/Ultimate Combat- Liberating Command (Spell)
Bastards of Golarion- Frostkin (Race Option)
Cheliax, Empire of Devils- Accelerated Drinker (Trait)
Quests & Campaigns- Oblivious (Drawback)
Ultimate Campaign- Fate's Favored (Trait)
Ultimate Intrigue- Battle Scion (Archetype); Warlord (Archetype)

Appearance: A man of short stature, he has commonly been mistaken for a dwarf and then again for a short human. His thick grey beard and wild hair hide some of his more distinctive half-orcish attributes.

Personality: Viktor is a man of many faces. His strong personality has earned him many loyal friends and bitter enemies. Viktor will be both the first to buy drinks for the entire tavern while also being first to beat down the man who might have spilled ale on his nice fur coat.

Sourcebooks
Advanced Class Guide- Skald (class)
Advanced Player's Guide- Lingering Performance (Feat) Timely Inspiration (Spell)
Advanced Player's Guide/Advanced Race Guide- Sacred Tattoo (alternative racial trait)
Advanced Race Guide- Arena-Bred (Alternative Racial Trait); City-Raised (Alternative Racial Trait); Mystic (Alternative Racial Trait); Shaman's apprentice (Alternative Racial Trait), Skilled (Alternative Racial Trait)
Andoran, Spirit of Liberty/Ultimate Combat- Liberating Command (Spell)
Bastards of Golarion- Frostkin (Race Option)
Cheliax, Empire of Devils- Accelerated Drinker (Trait)
Quests & Campaigns- Oblivious (Drawback)
Ultimate Campaign- Fate's Favored (Trait)
Ultimate Intrigue- Battle Scion (Archetype); Warlord (Archetype)

Aleria Altugle

Appearance: Carrying many satchels of which is stuffed writing utensils, scrolls and various books, she wears a simple green coat which is open to reveal a frilly blouse worn under a halterneck leather piece with it comes a tight brown jeans with belts strap around the calf, wearing leather boots with metal caps around the tip and soles of her boots.

Non-Core Materials:

• Scrollmaster
• Reactionary
• Magic is Life
• Focused Studies
• Comprehensive Education

The vampire template may already be in use by some players, but it isn't formally approved for play as yet. I'd like to change that. Does anyone have any objections; if so, what are they?

Non-Core Material:
FML. In-progress T_T

Appearance: At 6'1 and 260 lbs, Vera is massive and imposing. She has a stocky, wide frame, and despite her weight maintains impressive physical strength and endurance. Her skin is thick, tough, and covered in a thin sheen of white hair, contrasting with a serpentine tail coated in shaggier hair and bat-like ears that betray her otherworldly heritage.

Vera usually wears light, minimal clothing in town, but keeps robes around for formal situations and padded chain mail if it's apparent that battle will be necessary.

Personality: Generally boisterous and assertive. Has a closer definition of 'personal space' than most, which can make her seem artificially threatening. Friendly and energetic when she's in a good mood, but has a biting, sarcastic side.

Non-core Material
Oni-spawn Tiefling with the Scaled Skin, Beguiling Liar, Underworld Guide, and Prehensile Tail alternate racial traits
Scroll Scholar Cleric Archetype
Shub-Niggurath
Void Domain
Animal (Feather) Subdomain
Additional Traits Feat
Cunning Liar Trait
Clever Wordplay Trait
Fate's Favored Trait
Tomb Raider Trait

• You don't qualify for Kraken Style yet: you don't have a BAB of +3 or 3 monk levels, and none of your abilities let you bypass those prerequisites.
• Your background (and any benefits you receive from it) are unlisted or missing.
• It's not possible for you to have a Charisma of 8- the minimum score you can buy is a 7, and you have a +2 racial bonus.
• Your character's ability scores were built with 26 point buy.
• That vampire template is currently unapproved and not legal for play.

It's not an issue, per se, but are you sure you want to dump your Charisma? Many of your most important class features (including maneuver DCs, Gambits, and Force of Personality) key off of your Charisma score.

I would personally not recommend using the Bestiary Vampire template in the mean time. If you're set on making a vampire character, it might be a good idea to sit on it for a little while until we can review the HoA vampire. It's solid in my opinion, but it hasn't been updated in a while and we haven't had a chance to discuss it.

Non-core Material
Lamia race (with constrict, fanged, deceiver alternate traits)
Vampire
Reactionary Trait
Keeper of the Veil Trait
Improved Grapple houserule
Kraken Style
Warlord class
Steelfist Commando archetype
Masterwork Backpack

Other than those issues, the sheet looks good.

Appearance: Troca is an attractive, young, female plainsrunner, dressed in a single-piece garment that both maximizes mobility and shows off her form. For the most part, she appears to be human, betrayed only by her quick movements and her exotic garb.

Personality: Troca is friendly to those she meets unless given reason not to be. She's a little impulsive though, relying on her silver tongue to get her out of tricky situations.

Non-core Material
Plainsrunner race
Oracle class
Flame Mystery
Reactionary Trait
Blessed Touch Trait
Mediator Trait
Pride Drawback
Masterwork Backpack

Notes: Troca's oracle curse is the Frenetic curse, but since it hasn't been approved, I haven't added it to the sheet. At such time as Frenetic is approved (if it is approved), she will have it; otherwise she will not have a curse as per our homebrew option not to have one.

Approved.

Appearance: Having short dark crimson hair, whom is carries a book from the grand library,
he wears sleeveless studded leather armour and baggy leather pant, having fingerless gloves that are
and adorning a mask, he has a tribalist tattoo underneath his armour and mask which covers his left
face.

Personality: Having a desire for travelling and story-telling, he goes off and fills of his wanderlust.
Living life in the present, he tries to see life as a game and knows very well the consequences of his
actions but doesn't really care so much as long as it makes a good story for people to read.

Class: Stalker
Non-Core Materials
-Serene Stride
-Reactionary
-Unorthodox Method (Path of War Expanded)
-Shattered Mirror (Path of War Expanded)
-Riven Hourglass (Path of War Expanded)
-Veiled Moon
-Thrashing Dragon
-Dimdweller
-Focused Study
-Wayward Path

That's minor, though. Mechanically it's fine, approved.

Heinrich Human Gunslinger
Class: Gunslinger

Non-Core Material
Heart of the Wilderness
Revolvers
Reactionary
Never Stop Shooting

Appearance: Green Wavy Hair, Golden Eyes, Tail is Red with spots down the back of it.

Personality: Nesiphise while more comfortable around other people is still shy and a little skittish around them remembering the years of hatred she had to endure on her own in the wilds, hunted by her own kind as an outcast, wild creatures, and 'Adventurers'.

Class: Monk (Unchained)
Non-core Material
Lamia Race
Constrict
Fanged
Sansetsukon
Double-Chained Kama
Monk's Spade
Reactionary (Trait)
Seeker (Trait)
Monk's Kit

http://www.d20pfsrd.com/classes/base-classes/oracle/oracle-curses

I'm not trying to tear you down, just provide honest feedback on what I perceive as issues with the proposal. I'm sorry if it came off as too harsh.

I know I must be wasting your time with this and I apologize.

1. Post a thread for your character here, in the Character Approvals category. An example of such a post and their requirements can be found below.
2. Wait! Either a council member or someone in charge of character approvals will look over your post and character sheet when they've got the time. We're all volunteers, so please be patient.
3. If your character is approved, congratulations. Your thread will be locked, and you have permission to create a character page and link it on the characters page. Your character page must link to your approval thread- this will be used to verify that your character has actually been approved.
   • If your character isn't approved, there was something wrong with your character or post (perhaps it violated our character generation rules, or used disallowed material). You will be informed of whatever issues were present so you can adjust them, if you still want to get the same character approved. If you want to abandon your character, post a message to that effect in your thread and a moderator will delete it.

The rules for character generation and character pages can be found in the appropriate sections.

Your post should include:

• Your character's name
• A link to your character's complete character sheet (incomplete character sheets will never be approved)
• Optionally, information on your character's personality, appearance, and background
• Links to all material your character uses that isn't in the Pathfinder RPG Core Rulebook

For example, a thread might look like this:

Title: Boris, Human Barbarian
Character Sheet

Appearance: Boris is of average height and has unremarkable features, aside from a perpetually angry scowl etched into his face.

Personality: Boris is willing to jump into any conflict at a moment's notice- especially if there's coin waiting for him on the other side. Outside of active battle he prefers brooding to celebrating and keeps a poetry journal.

Non-core Material
Invulnerable Rager Barbarian Archetype
Human with the Practiced Hunter alternate racial trait
Tribal Scars Feat
Raging Vitality Feat
Defensive Strategist Trait
Reactionary Trait
Bardiche Weapon
Spiked Gauntlet Weapon
Barbarian's Kit
Masterwork Backpack

if you would like i can propose another book but it isnt on the d20pfsrd.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B_2h8hWRAEQ9aFk3Z3kxQ3k1UkU/view?usp=sharing
pages 51-52, theres actually 2 options here.
the only note here is the "Tauren" weapons would have to be ignored.

It also doesn't seem to model traditionally desirable traits for minotaurs very well, like charging people with powerful gores or never getting lost. What's the upshot?

Access & General Mechanics
The general rules on components are far too vague. Leaving too much up to individual GM interpretation is necessarily going to cause conflict and inconsistency, especially for activities that occur during downtime (such as harvesting materials). It's hard to parse how any of this is supposed to really work. For instance, searching for materials doesn't tell you where it's appropriate, how long it takes, whether you receive 'units' or 'materials' for your time, or what the "found at rate" actually does. The Use, Pricing and Selling (everything needs a definitive value, it can't be up to a random person's will), and Growing/Making Components sections all need to be rewritten.

Components
There's a lot to talk about here, but I don't think it would be very productive to go into each option specifically. There are frequent issues with undefined rules, but the biggest problem with this system is that most of the components fall into a few categories:

• Useless: Sometimes due to being overpriced, but generally just not being worth the headspace for the effect. The very first component, Bitterweed, falls here; you can spend 50 to 100 gp to make a healing potion remove the Sickened condition and replace it with the significantly more detrimental Staggered condition. Other components that fall in here include Red-caps, Bullet Nuts, Honey Poppy, Knot Lilies, and Sheepstick Reed (there are no cloth items worth more than 600,000 gp, which there would need to be for there to be any potential usage for the component), Honey Bud Ants, and so forth.
• Broken: A lot of the components have malformed mechanics that either don't work or obviate ability standards (such as by inflicting a debilitating condition without allowing a saving throw). Taun doesn't list the amount of Fast Healing it grants, for instance. Other components in this category include Dizzy Cap Spore, Reaper's Kiss (Necrotic damage doesn't exist), Firestarter Legs, etc.
• Crafting Staples: Many components affect crafting in such a way that they're either mandatory for certain types of items (they reduce the cost by more than their value), or produce effects for far cheaper than their real value. One of the most egregious examples are Lucky Shells, which produce a superior effect to the Luckstone for only 1,500 - 3,000 gp. Other cases are Glade-Touch Vines (for any item that costs 30,000 to 60,000 or more), Dread Talons, Blessed Stone, Aquacite, and so forth.
• Mandatory Tools: These either completely replace existing options due to being superior in either or both cost or effectiveness, or are so powerful they'd end up as a staple for every character. For example, a unit of Edict Feathers costs 100 to 200 gp, and can be used by any character. Equivalent options to that are a scroll (which 1,125 minimum and has usage requirements) or spellcasting services (450 gp, assuming you don't have to pay for a round trip for the caster)- significantly more limited and expensive than the Edict Feathers, which put long range teleportation in the hands of everybody cheaply and much earlier.
• Spellcaster Buffs: There are a lot of components that just boost save DCs for specific sorts of effects or increase spellcasting efficiency. Some of these are worse than others (mostly the ones that are Common), but there are two main players that would cause more harm to gameplay than any of the others. Blue Devils cost 25 to 50 gp per charge and increase the save DC of a spell by 2 (1 if you're female, which makes female characters literally worse at being offensive spellcasters than male characters)- this is sort of expensive at low levels, but quickly becomes something you can afford to pop into every offensive spell you cast, making one of the most powerful character types (offensive casters that force saves versus losing fights) even more powerful. Catalyst Shards are similar. They cost between 100 to 200 gp, and let a spellcaster cast a spell as a move action- allowing casters to nova even harder to end fights really quickly if it's necessary.

I'm not sure how you'd fix these issues. There's a huge amount of raw material to work through, and a lot of the mechanics are down a dead end path and need to just be scrapped. If this is something you want to carry on with, it would be a good idea to decide what exactly your goals are with a system for more spell and crafting components beforehand, because this… doesn't really do much to improve the game, and has a lot of outright harmful material.

Mechanically I'm okay with it, but I'm hesitant about its inclusion since it has narrow value (monk characters that focus on firearms)- it seems like the sort of thing that'll get used one or two times and then abandoned.

Tentatively, +1.

Writeup edited for clarity:
Gun-Fu
Prerequisites: Flurry of Blows, Weapon Focus with Firearms
Benefit: You treat firearms as if they possessed the monk weapon property.

It's versatile and straight forward enough to be used to multiple people, which justifies its place on the approved content list.

+1

Access to these powers: http://www.d20pfsrd.com/psionics-unleashed/power-lists/power-list-psion-wilder
And access to the "shaper"/"metacreativity" list: http://www.d20pfsrd.com/psionics-unleashed/power-lists/power-list-psion-discipline-powers#TOC-Shaper-1

PP progression and powers known and power level here:

+ Powers Table

- Powers Table

header says it all…

Appearance: Solomon or Sol as he is regularly called, stand approximately 2 inches over 6 foot tale. He has long dark brown hair that he keeps tied back with a head band with a metal plate on the forehead with the word *free* gouged into it. He wears a long red and off color duster over a red and black sleeveless tunic and chain shirt. His muscles stand out in rolling cords down both his arms, giving the appearance of living snakes moving beneath the surface. His eyes are a dull read orange giving it a look of a colored glass marble with a candle behind it. His eyes wash over most people without even seeing them, they seem to instantly size you up and write you of as he walks by. Mostly his gaze is fixed on the ground or in the middle distances, not looking at anything or anyone in particular. He seems very serious in nature although he wears a grim or dismissive smile, like what he sees around him he either finds disgusting or humorously trivial. You get the feeling his mind in on some sort of tragedy, he can at times be seen to grimace when observing people in need or authorities over extending their reach. He wears a battered and word cestus on each fist, and a odd looking bundle is wrapped and carried over one shoulder.

Personality: He is dismissive, short tempered, and reclusive at times. He doesn't go out of his way to make or continue conversation and when asked something that brings a painful memory or borders too closely on the personal he shuts down. More likely to get into a fight than most. He has a contempt of those in leadership positions and at times seems to openly question people just because of their positions of authority.

All Core (At least I think it is.)

For instance, Vera would require someone to look up material from a half dozen different sources as-is, linking everything on one page makes it way faster to look up relevant material than needing to search for each thing individually. You usually have to look everything up to build a character anyway, so it shouldn't add much more time to character creation.